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My hands felt wet. I looked at the now blood soaked clothe. I slowly lift it of my wound. I grimaced in disgust. I hold the clothe back in place. I start my journey through the abandon alley, looking for some shelter to protect me from the rain and him.  I turn to look at the sky. The sun is setting, faster than I expect.
“Shit”, I whisper.
I panicked. I walk quickly through the alley and come out onto a busy street.
I hide in the shadows so no one will see me or my wound.
I turn and look at the sky. It is already night. I pick up my pace.
My walking turns into a jog, then a run.

The streets are now abandoned.  I wrap my arms around my cold body.
It so quiet, it almost makes me feel completely alone.
Until I hear the footsteps behind me. I feel my heart miss a beat.
I look in front of me, searching the alleyway for an escape route.
Nothing. It’s a dead end, well for a mortal I guess.
I run forward at inhuman speed and leap up on to the top of the buildings.
I search for the temple, my sanctuary where Sasuke can’t reach me.
I look down to the streets, to see if Sasuke has followed me.
It’s impossible; the whole street is covered in fog, a dark and frighting grey.


Suddenly someone grabs me from behind. I try to scream out for help, but the mysterious person grasps their hand around my mouth, blocking out my scream.
“Sssshhh. Your too loud Tsuki, you’ll get us both killed.”
I relax at the sound of my companion’s voice.
“Took you long enough, have you seen my arm. Ugh, just forget about it, let head to the temple .I I... Just want to go home and see my sister, this world is to barbaric for me”
Sasori just nods in agreement. We run as quietly across the building to the outskirts of the village. I keep having this feeling that sasuke is following, but I shake the feeling of. It took us about 30 minutes to get to the outskirts.
The fog was lighter on the outskirts, so the only thing that we could not see was our feet.


“How long Sasori?” I asked.
“An hour tops, I guess. Hurry we will get to the temple and then you have to keep your end of the bargain. Ok.” Sasori dryly replied.
“I’m very happy you were the one to help me Sasori. Most mortal men when they help a Joutei, they only think of themselves and ask for something to fill their greedy bellies, but you Sasori, you thought of your parents and your little brother. I wish the world one day be filled with more people like you.”


A light pink blush crossed Sasori face.  Out of nowhere a man completely covered in rags walked into our path. He started to clap.
“Oh how beautiful and sincere you are my dear Tsuki, sadly it is all fake.
Boy, don’t listen to a word she says. It just turns into lies. I should know after all is cost me my eyes.” The man came close to me.


My whole body froze in fear. I could easily kill Sasuke, but I don’t want to. I value our memories we shared together.
“Sasuke...... please don’t.”
Sasuke was surprised by my reply. He stared at me with his empty eyes.
He started to laugh.

“Hahaha ... me stop, I wouldn’t now. You deserve to die and after I do kill your dear sister Taiyou will be next....”
Before sasuke finished his sentence my fist meet with his jaw and sent him flying 3 feet away.
“Don’t you dare touch my sister. If I have to I will kill you.”
I ran at him and kicked him up to the sky. I jumped up after him and sent hum down to the ground with huge force.

My feet landed softly on the ground. I walked over to the ruined road where Sasuke laid. He was lying very still. I bent down and removed the rags lay over his eyes. I placed my hands over them and chanted a spell. My hands started to glow and started to heal Sasuke blind eyes. I removed them and looked at him. His eyelids fluttered. I looked at his crimson red eyes. Sasori came up to me and whispered into my ear.
“Tsuki, it’s time.....”
“I know. Thank you Sasori. When you return home you will have the vast amount of money.”
I Turned and looked at sasuke. His eyes were full of confusion.
“I’m so sorry Sasuke. I wish you could forgive me.”
Then the sun came out and I slowly faded away.
©2008-2009 ~luna-Procer
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Author's Comments

This short story i wrote was for a assement at school.
We basically had to write a story from a poem .
We had a whole booklet of poems and i picked a poem called the Fog by R.S McCreary.
hopefully i get a good mark for english ^.^
i also need to quote
that my charaters may have the same names
as some charaters from naruto
they are not like each other in personality or looks
they just have the same names because of the characters personalities-
sasuke- assasin , person in story trying to kill someone
tsuki- moon, moon goddess
sasori- scorpian, the guy lives by the sea and i forgot the other reason

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My gosh MK, did you hand it up with the swear word?
Sasuke? Sasori? =P
:iconluna-procer:
no
it was orignally bugger
but i changed it to shit because
its sounds better in that situation.
I picked sasuke and sasori because their names fit with the charaters peronalities

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Then she vomited a fountain of blood. Nice.
:iconlilotakuangy:
i know the whole deep meaning with sasuke and sasori but.. but.. i just couldn't help but imagine the naruto characters xD

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awesommme
i never knew u wer so good at writing storries~!

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Thanks :D no one said my writing was good.

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Then she vomited a fountain of blood. Nice.
:icona-l-i-e-nxx:
its iss!

its wayy better than mine anywayys:P

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